Remember, Do you remember?


Remember,do you remember?
Autum days with the warmth of summer,
being cinderella with a glass slipper,
Remember,do u remember?
The walks at the soft sand beach,
the who’s gonna grab the first olives and peach,
The pink gown on our first stage performance,
my red birthday and expression on your countenance,
remember,do u remeber?

Matches at the football flied,
cheering and all the pleads,
the winning , the losing,
the sorrow , the joy.
Remeber,do you remember?

Amongst all the experiences,
once we had there is this,
painful question hides…
Do you remember who am I ?

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19 thoughts on “Remember, Do you remember?

  1. Seb says:

    That’s timeless. There’s so much empathy for our human frailties here.

  2. zygerina says:

    Thanx sir! Honoured to recieve your comment!

  3. saka16492 says:

    It’s a real horrible experience when your loved one forgets you. That is indeed a painful question. Nice one! Keep it up!

  4. zygerina says:

    Thnx! It hurts but gives a boost to writing …thnx again!

  5. soumyav says:

    Thanks for going thru my blog.. nice posts here.this one is touchy..

  6. zygerina says:

    Thank you im honoured to recieve comment from a writer like you! Thnx!

  7. zygerina says:

    Chandan thanks even ur smiley means a lot!

  8. Nanda says:

    this is so sad… i really relate to it…
    sometimes we can just wonder… if the one remembers us! πŸ˜‰

  9. satprem33 says:

    Deeply touched by this wonderfully sad piece~

  10. jyoti7208 says:

    First of all,
    I wanna thankyou for going through my blog and leaving your words behind. the emptiness in this poet is felt within me too.. really felt nyc and it kills when our beloved forgets us..
    Thankyou…

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