Remember,do you remember?
Autum days with the warmth of summer,
being cinderella with a glass slipper,
Remember,do u remember?
The walks at the soft sand beach,
the who’s gonna grab the first olives and peach,
The pink gown on our first stage performance,
my red birthday and expression on your countenance,
remember,do u remeber?
Matches at the football flied,
cheering and all the pleads,
the winning , the losing,
the sorrow , the joy.
Remeber,do you remember?
Amongst all the experiences,
once we had there is this,
painful question hides…
Do you remember who am I ?
That’s timeless. There’s so much empathy for our human frailties here.
Thanx sir! Honoured to recieve your comment!
It’s a real horrible experience when your loved one forgets you. That is indeed a painful question. Nice one! Keep it up!
Thnx! It hurts but gives a boost to writing …thnx again!
You are welcome! I am glad that pain inspires you to write such good poems. Keep writing!
Thanks for going thru my blog.. nice posts here.this one is touchy..
Thank you im honoured to recieve comment from a writer like you! Thnx!
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Great poem Z…very, very moving!
Oh thank you wendell it means a lot sir, and few lines were missing just added them!
Chandan thanks even ur smiley means a lot!
this is so sad… i really relate to it…
sometimes we can just wonder… if the one remembers us! π
Thank u and am happy u cud relate to it
Deeply touched by this wonderfully sad piece~
Thnxssssss
First of all,
I wanna thankyou for going through my blog and leaving your words behind. the emptiness in this poet is felt within me too.. really felt nyc and it kills when our beloved forgets us..
Thankyou…
Ohh its always a pleasure…,btw thank u so much yeah its always horrible that ppl u love forgets u…anyways thanks for going thru ma blog too hope to see often..bless ya!
your welcome dear… with love and blessings…
Thanks! π