When i held your hand,
it wasnt just ahold,
it was trust that handed you,
with all my faith,
i trusted you……
when i embraced you ,
before everytime you left,
that wasnt just a hug,
i handed myself over to you forever,
i ensured myself that you’d be returning,
I believed you…….
WHEN I LOOKED AT YOU…
KISSED YOU ……
That wasnt just a look and liplock,
i placed my soul over ur lips and,
with my eyes i placed my heart,
TO YOU…….
I LOVED YOU………….
12 feb 2013
Wonderful… 🙂
THANK U I MISSED UR COMMMENTS 🙂
😛 hahahaa.. 😛 here you have one.. 🙂 beautiful poem btw! 🙂
hahhahaha thnx
nyccc!!! sweet and lovable!!
THANK YOU JYOTI NICE TO HAVE YOUR COMMENTS! 🙂
feels grt to read them in your page… god bless
Awesome poem Z, breathtakingly beautiful! Now that is writing!!!! God bless you and much love always my sister!
THANK YOU WENDELL FOR ALWAYS INSPIRING ME YOU GET ME WRITING THANK YOU VERY MUCH!
an awesome blossom poem zy……loved it…:D
WOW ITS A GREAT FEELING GETTING COMMENTS FROM ALL OF YOU I LOVE YOU GUYS KEEP INSPIRING ME IM VERY GLAD U LOVED IT NIDHI THANK YOU VERY MUCH!
hahahahah….no need for so many thank yous yar…you are great….so u deserve all those compliments….just keep on writing and posting these lovely poems for me….:-)
hahaha ..i’d love to….I kinda breathe these things……………oooh zyada ho gaya naa!
hahahahaha….nah…being a fellow poet….i can understand what you mean….;-)
GLAD TO HAVE YOU MADE MY DAYY!
same here sweetheart….enjoyed comment chatting with you…..:D
NOT GOOD WITH SMILEYS BUT HERES ONE! 🙂
🙂